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    TODAY!!!!!

    Post by Zaper_the_Warrior on Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:43 am

    Today!

    Sorrow surrounds me
    Dragging me down
    It’s normally all I can see
    But not today!

    Now feel good
    A strange energy courses threw me
    No need for comfort food
    Cause I’m ready for today!

    I have a felling
    Like a weight is off my shoulders
    I’m ready for the day’s dealings
    I’m ready for today!

    Full of energy long forgotten
    I look at the star filled sky and feel excitement
    I look forward to this day I have gotten
    It’s time for today!

    Things will go my way
    Life is finally coming back to me
    The demons will stay at bay
    I’m here for Today!

    It’s 3 am and I feel a excitement for life that I have forgotten I could have…
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    Post by TGM on Thu Mar 25, 2010 11:19 am

    Do u write these for fun? Or do you write them to get money?
    B/C these are really good.
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    Post by zero on Thu Mar 25, 2010 3:17 pm

    that was amazing man


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    Post by Zaper_the_Warrior on Fri Mar 26, 2010 9:15 am

    Fun. If they were for money i woun't be posting them here lol! besides, there not that good.

    But thank guys.
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    Post by zero on Fri Mar 26, 2010 3:53 pm

    i loved it


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    Post by minininja on Mon May 31, 2010 5:32 am

    very good poetry =) I should post some of mine one day
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    Post by Zaper_the_Warrior on Mon May 31, 2010 9:03 pm

    That would be cool.
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    Post by minininja on Tue Jun 01, 2010 7:38 am

    Yeah but my poems are all sad lol
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    Post by treeckofan on Thu Jun 03, 2010 5:49 pm

    criticism on your rhyming, it doesnt really rhyme well if you add an s, forgotten and gotten sounds the same. solid poem though
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    Post by minininja on Thu Jun 03, 2010 6:02 pm

    Yeah but poems don't always have to rhyme to be good
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    Post by treeckofan on Sat Jun 05, 2010 12:25 am

    as i said, solid poem
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    Post by minininja on Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:04 am

    Yeah lol
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    Post by zero on Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:29 pm

    totally the emotion was great


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    Post by minininja on Fri Jun 25, 2010 9:53 am

    definitely was

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